Literacy Monday lesson pt 1

Some of the characters in our story don’t want to be friends with the Yeti but they haven’t explained why! Can you up-level their sentences using conjunctions so the Yeti can understand?




Elven says I don’t want to be your friend because your big and hairy and spooky


I dont want to be your friend because you are too big and gientnormase . Go away you are the hairiste yeti every i have seen. You don belong here leave aur Planit alone.


I am gowing to be your friend because i want to
play with you.


I don t wont to be your friend because you are too big so you should go away. You are too big and too scary. I think you should go some where Else much more far away so you will not scar, and chais poppel away.


I don’t want to be your friend becouse you are too big so you might scare Iittle
People away and I don’t think you would be a good friend I am scare of you friend


I don’t want to be your friend becase you look so ugly I won’t play with you case your rubish at gamems so that’s why you can’t play with us.


I think you will herte me because you are too big.


You could put why? At the end of the sentences. Keiras read all the words to me ?

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Miss Creamer

Year 6 Teacher

My name is Miss Creamer, this is my first year at WCPS and my first year of teaching! I have just finished my PGCE at university. I prefer chatty classrooms to quiet ones, I love to read and also love to challenge myself and learn new things- I have just started lessons to learn sign language!